I can't comment on the validity of the information but I can tell you that you definitely need to proofread and change some phrasing.
- Name should be capitalized (Slide 1)
- send* (Slide 2)
- USB, Google, Dropbox, and Outlook should all be capitalized (Slide 2)
- Rephrase "make everyone happy", possibly "fix this to everyone's satisfaction" (Slide 2)
- Coworkers is one word (Slide 4)
- Instead of using a slash, use "or" (Slide 4)
- Remove the period between "boss" and "without" and remove capitalization on without (Slide 4)
- End sentence with period
- Change "get perms" to "have permissions" (Slide 5)
- Change "perms" to "permissions" in the second line (Slide 5)
- Add "and" before "see all" (Slide 5)
- Remove the "and" in the third section and change "perms" to "permissions" (Slide 5)
- "things that might happen" is very vague, make this more specific (Slide 5)
- If everything is underlined, nothing is (Slide 6)
- CDW should be capitalized (Slide 6)
- Not required, but you should probably configure the google link so that it has a name instead of just a URL (Slide 6 and 7)
- Capitalize "Walmart" (Slide 7)
- Try to avoid repeating "into" so close to each other (Slide 7)
- "Cat 6" should be capitalized (Slide 8)
- Link again (Slide 8)
- This is extremely awkward and unnecessary quote placement (Slide 8)
- "Its" should be "It's" in the second section (Slide 8)
- "WiFi" should have W and F capitalized (Slide 8)
- Capitalize "Windows 10" and remove capitalization from "on" (Slide 9)
- Change first comma to semicolon (Slide 9)
- Remove capitalization on "with" and the period before it (Slide 9)
- Remove capitalization and the period before it from "on" in the second section (Slide 9)
- Change slide title to "What will protect the computers?" or "Computer Protection" (Slide 10)
- Remove "well" from the introduction, change 2 to "two", and add colon at the end of the introduction (Slide 10)
- Add semicolon after "vary" (Slide 10)
- "a 25% discount" instead of "a 25% off" (Slide 10)
- Title links instead of using URLs (Slide 10)
- Remove "So" and capitalize "the" (Slide 11)
- Change "what is what" to something less informal (Slide 11)
- End sentence with period (Slide 11)
- Remove "So" and capitalize "this" (Slide 12)
- Put quotation marks around the quote (Slide 12)
- Title the link instead of having the URL there (Slide 12)
- Increase the size of "Any questions?" and add question mark (Slide 12)