Basil Darkratte
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I am still working on Chapter 2 of the story Remember Me. So don't worry, I didn't stop and pushed it to the side. Im still working out a few points in the chapter, so hold on just a little bit more.
I have decided to show a small part of the Chapter here. Just to hold you until the rest comes
Note: This is how it looks in the Chapter as of now, without any spelling corrections, or any changes.
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" Er, Master Gibbs." Jack said
" Aye, sir." Gibbs replied
" Set a course to Torutga."
" Aye, sir. 'ave what we came for?"
" We do." Jack lowers his voice making sure no one else hears. " It's in
my quaters now."
" And the reason we be sailng to a wild port such as Tortuga?"
" I have an old acquaintance to see, as it were."
" And does this 'old acquaintance' have anything to do with that
trinket?"
" A trinket?" Jack takes a step back, " Is that what you call it? Let me
remind you, I did not go through all this trouble-"
" 'I' meaning that Hayes boy?" Said Gibbs.
" I'm the one who has the compass, mate! So, technically, it was my
burden, savvy?"
" Aye Cap'n" Gibbs adjustes the ship's wheel, He looks forward.
" As I was saying, I did not go through all that trouble for some
trinket."
" Ah, and since you went through all that trouble, I'm guessin' it be
somethin' Valuable."
" More than you will ever know, mate; It's a sword!"
In the background, a pirate yells orders to the others.
" A sword?" Said Gibbs
" I believe that's what I said, mate, The Governor's Sword."
" Are you meanin' to tell me, we risked a pirates life just for a bloody
sword?"
" Firstly!" Jack holds up one finger, " Hayes chose it; he knows the
risk, Secondly!" He holds up another finger," He's a Pirate!, And
Thirdly," Jack holds up two more fingers- a grand total of four
fingers," It's more than a sword savvy?"
" If it's more than a sword, then what is it?" Asked Gibbs.
" I haven't the foggest. That's where my acquaintance comes in. Once he
gives me what I need, we'll be on our way."
" And he is going to give it to you just like that?"
" If only things were that simple." Jack taps on the railing in front of
the wheel," Nay, mate. The only way I'll get it from him is in a Poker
game."
" Now, Jack. You know your luck with Poker." Gibbs turns to face him. "
What If something should go wrong?"
" Son, what could possiably go wrong? I'm Captain Jack Sparrow."
" Aye, that's exacly what I mean. The last time you said that, we were
being chased by pirates you owned money to."
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I have decided to show a small part of the Chapter here. Just to hold you until the rest comes
Note: This is how it looks in the Chapter as of now, without any spelling corrections, or any changes.
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" Er, Master Gibbs." Jack said
" Aye, sir." Gibbs replied
" Set a course to Torutga."
" Aye, sir. 'ave what we came for?"
" We do." Jack lowers his voice making sure no one else hears. " It's in
my quaters now."
" And the reason we be sailng to a wild port such as Tortuga?"
" I have an old acquaintance to see, as it were."
" And does this 'old acquaintance' have anything to do with that
trinket?"
" A trinket?" Jack takes a step back, " Is that what you call it? Let me
remind you, I did not go through all this trouble-"
" 'I' meaning that Hayes boy?" Said Gibbs.
" I'm the one who has the compass, mate! So, technically, it was my
burden, savvy?"
" Aye Cap'n" Gibbs adjustes the ship's wheel, He looks forward.
" As I was saying, I did not go through all that trouble for some
trinket."
" Ah, and since you went through all that trouble, I'm guessin' it be
somethin' Valuable."
" More than you will ever know, mate; It's a sword!"
In the background, a pirate yells orders to the others.
" A sword?" Said Gibbs
" I believe that's what I said, mate, The Governor's Sword."
" Are you meanin' to tell me, we risked a pirates life just for a bloody
sword?"
" Firstly!" Jack holds up one finger, " Hayes chose it; he knows the
risk, Secondly!" He holds up another finger," He's a Pirate!, And
Thirdly," Jack holds up two more fingers- a grand total of four
fingers," It's more than a sword savvy?"
" If it's more than a sword, then what is it?" Asked Gibbs.
" I haven't the foggest. That's where my acquaintance comes in. Once he
gives me what I need, we'll be on our way."
" And he is going to give it to you just like that?"
" If only things were that simple." Jack taps on the railing in front of
the wheel," Nay, mate. The only way I'll get it from him is in a Poker
game."
" Now, Jack. You know your luck with Poker." Gibbs turns to face him. "
What If something should go wrong?"
" Son, what could possiably go wrong? I'm Captain Jack Sparrow."
" Aye, that's exacly what I mean. The last time you said that, we were
being chased by pirates you owned money to."
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When will the real movie come out? Eh, it's still a script, huh ... aww, I can already see it playing ...
