You Create The Story

[Will Nightwolf]

In this thread I will say a sentence then someone else will say a sentence that adds on to the story. It's that simple.

Example: person 1-once upon a time person2- a man walked down a road

Rules:
-First off any innapropriate response will be removed immidieatley
-You can not end the story if you do your comment will be removed or the the ending part will be removed
-Give other people a chance to write don't comment on every other post
-Only write story responses do not write any comments until the story is over wich I will decide when is over
-Again keep everything appropriate I will remove all innapropriate comments
-Do not write a long sentence no more than 1 or 2 lines

-Again keep everything appropriate I can't stress that enough

New rule: if two people post a comment at same time I will pick the better one and delete the other if they cant go together
Ok now here is the start of the story add on to it

On a dark and stormy night

 

[Jade Wildfury]

not a star to be seen; nor the moon to afford a pale gentle light. Through the darkness in a small little town a pirate

 

[Basil Darkratte]

was sneaking around; Quiet and without a sound, he runs to the docks.

 

[Jade Wildfury]

he stops and stands silent staring at the darkness, listening to the raging wind, at that moment he felt it; he knew that a change was coming

 

[Arg2448]

he saw the new change it was called infamy ever since hes been sailing all day

 

[Jade Wildfury]

aye he sails all day, but when the night falls he

 

[Basil Darkratte]

gets drunk in bars like tortuga. And on this night...

 

[Will Nightwolf]

he see's a lovely pirate lass on the other side of the bar

 

[Arg2448]

and then he runs away all the way to ravens cove

 

[Basil Darkratte]

On the island there nothing but fighting he has to get away from there

 

[JadeOHayes]

When he gets there, something hits him on the head ... What was I running away from ... I should've said Hi to her ...

 

[Captian Fear]

But his thoughts were interrupted from a splash of a water and he looked over his shoulder to find a mermaid sitting on the rocks

 

[JadeOHayes]

He pinches his arm, shaking his head, thinking ... Is that a human? Or fish ...

 

[Captian Fear]

She whispers into his ear, "Help me search for my father's treasures..."

 

[JadeOHayes]

Suddenly the world around him stands stills. All the noise of fighting behind him seems like a mile away ...

 

[Captian Fear]

A large beared man weilding a trident stares at him. The pirate, Jacoby, seems to be underwater.

 

[Basil Darkratte]

" Poseidon?" He said, " Am I dead? Am I going to the locker?"

 

[Jade Wildfury]

"Nay, but you must help my daughter seek the lost treasure" answers Poseidon

 

[Will Nightwolf]

He says alright I will help your daughter seek the treasure

 

[Captian Fear]

The beautiful mermaid appears and with her a fast white sloop that looks as if it were made of seaform.