You Create The Story

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  1. Will Nightwolf

    Will Nightwolf Legendary Pirate
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    In this thread I will say a sentence then someone else will say a sentence that adds on to the story. It's that simple.

    Example: person 1-once upon a time person2- a man walked down a road

    Rules:
    -First off any innapropriate response will be removed immidieatley
    -You can not end the story if you do your comment will be removed or the the ending part will be removed
    -Give other people a chance to write don't comment on every other post
    -Only write story responses do not write any comments until the story is over wich I will decide when is over
    -Again keep everything appropriate I will remove all innapropriate comments
    -Do not write a long sentence no more than 1 or 2 lines

    -Again keep everything appropriate I can't stress that enough

    New rule: if two people post a comment at same time I will pick the better one and delete the other if they cant go together
    Ok now here is the start of the story add on to it

    On a dark and stormy night
     
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  2. not a star to be seen; nor the moon to afford a pale gentle light. Through the darkness in a small little town a pirate
     
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  3. Basil Darkratte

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    was sneaking around; Quiet and without a sound, he runs to the docks.
     
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  4. he stops and stands silent staring at the darkness, listening to the raging wind, at that moment he felt it; he knew that a change was coming
     
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  5. Arg2448

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    he saw the new change it was called infamy ever since hes been sailing all day
     
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  6. aye he sails all day, but when the night falls he
     
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  7. Basil Darkratte

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    gets drunk in bars like tortuga. And on this night...
     
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  8. Will Nightwolf

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    he see's a lovely pirate lass on the other side of the bar
     
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  9. Arg2448

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    and then he runs away all the way to ravens cove
     
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  10. Basil Darkratte

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    On the island there nothing but fighting he has to get away from there
     
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    When he gets there, something hits him on the head ... What was I running away from ... I should've said Hi to her ...
     
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  12. Captian Fear

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    But his thoughts were interrupted from a splash of a water and he looked over his shoulder to find a mermaid sitting on the rocks
     
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    He pinches his arm, shaking his head, thinking ... Is that a human? Or fish ...
     
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  14. Captian Fear

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    She whispers into his ear, "Help me search for my father's treasures..."
     
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    Suddenly the world around him stands stills. All the noise of fighting behind him seems like a mile away ...
     
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  16. Captian Fear

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    A large beared man weilding a trident stares at him. The pirate, Jacoby, seems to be underwater.
     
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  17. Basil Darkratte

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    " Poseidon?" He said, " Am I dead? Am I going to the locker?"
     
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  18. "Nay, but you must help my daughter seek the lost treasure" answers Poseidon
     
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  19. Will Nightwolf

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    He says alright I will help your daughter seek the treasure
     
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  20. Captian Fear

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    The beautiful mermaid appears and with her a fast white sloop that looks as if it were made of seaform.
     
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